Present person does not know really medium what evil, regard others mother easily. Return some to was not taken care to be bungled by the ball of others on field, the other side became “ foolish *” . Get on a car from back door namely otherwise, the driver lets him courteously get on a car from front door, he also ground of “ courteous ” says: Your * of “ my * ! ”
现在的人真不知道中了什么邪，动不动就问候别人妈妈。还有的在球场上被别人的球不小心砸了一下，对方就成了“傻*”。不然就是从后门上车，司机礼貌地让他从前门上车，他也“礼貌”地说：“我*你*！”
Bout goes out to play a ball game, feel is very disappointing, the ball is hit not carefully to to look first the person of 3. I just should say: “ Is am sorry. ” he with respect to ground of right on the face: Your * of “ my * you foolish *” . I also did not set upright situation of “ international friendly good hand (middle finger) ” , just went away. He nots comply however not forgive, be aimed at me everywhere. I said sentence: “ Is am sorry. Ask your group posse to go away. (boil namely) the uncle on the side of ” also is saying: This old friend still bullies “ child, really smelly do not want Face. The of 3 person at the beginning of that went ” awkwardly.来源 wwW.ZUowEnbA.nET
有一回出去打球，手感十分差劲，球不小心打到了一个看起来初三的人。我刚要说：“对不起。”他就劈头盖脸地：“我*你*你个傻*”。我也没竖“国际友好手势（中指）”，只是走开了。他却不依不饶，处处针对我。我就说了句：“对不起。请你团一团走开。（就是滚）”旁边的叔叔也在说：“这个大朋友还欺负小朋友，真是臭不要face。”那初三的人尴尬地走了。
Our Na Donglou has an uncle, white Nature's engineering makes a party, in the evening social person. Every move one box beer to in the evening, take an incense smoke, string of big gold chain is worn on the neck, wear a sunglasses in the evening, “ pesticide ” is hit on the balcony. I rely on “ this Han is believed was hanged! I go to ”“ your * Ma Huateng takes care of V8 player! ” everyday in the evening, such sound as one falls. Not only such, there is the beer bottle that did not drink in the evening everyday from above drop come wet the sheet below, burned the sheet below till the butt that lost to did not destroy once, the result is downstair the uncle in that other people rushed forward that person cruel hit, spit aromatic emissary ” without “ nightly mouth again from now on.
我们那栋楼有个叔叔，白天工作党，晚上社会人。每到晚上就搬一箱啤酒，拿一盒香烟，脖子上戴串大金链子，晚上戴个墨镜，在阳台上打“农药”。“我靠这韩信开挂了吧！”“我去你*马化腾照顾一下V8玩家呀！”每天晚上，这样的声音此起彼伏。不光如此，每天晚上都有没喝完的啤酒瓶从上面丢下来湿了下面的床单，直到有一次丢了一个没灭的烟头烧了下面的床单，结果楼下那户人家里的叔叔冲了上去把那人暴打一顿，从此再无“夜间口吐芬芳使者”。
What is civilized? A lot of people feel civilization is not litter, do not spit in disorder, abide by discipline is abide by the law, complaisant. Can what how you know he or her is complaisant either those who install? Perhaps he (she) not be very good in your memory, but in him (she) a good student or good employee perhaps are before teacher or boss. I believe more person is willing to do true Christian more, the savage that because be apt to the person with respect to name-calling and one character disagreement leave,hits indeed distinction of it doesn't matter, after all nobody is willing to do savage.
什么是文明？很多人都觉得文明就是不乱丢垃圾，不乱吐痰，遵纪守法，彬彬有礼。可你怎么就知道他或她的彬彬有礼不是装出来的呢？也许他（她）在你心目中不是很好，但在他（她）的老师或老板面前也许就是一个好学生或好员工了呢。我相信更多人更愿意做真实的文明人，因为动不动就骂人的人和一言不合就开打的野人着实没什么区别，毕竟没人愿意做野人。
Classmate of Lu grand day, see your composition theme above all, the teacher is thinking, it is what let you have such idea, write a such compositions. Taking such issue the composition that I saw you, as expected, the composition answered my question at the beginning, because social phenomenon is such. Leave piece the enumeration of social phenomenon, although state,still need again consider, but the circumstance of “ civilized ” that this also is social reality really, catch you specific wrote beside the thing that produce, of each character appear very clever, it is you it seems that arrangement comes on the stage well character, highlight uncivilized current situation. Have comment finally. So the teacher wants to say, seem now actually very attract a reader, but your thematic key talks ” in “ , on the length of the composition for, talked proportion is apparent and insufficient, so, the teacher suggests you, the phenomenon is derivative only the method of your argument, but the key should be in theory, offer your argument, prove your viewpoint, baconian finally conclusion, this is the structure with the basiccest argumentative writing. Before writing argumentative writing, academic knowledge should be done first sufficient.
卢浩天同学，首先看到你的作文题目，老师在思考，是什么让你有了这样的想法，写这样一篇作文。带着这样的问题我看完了你的作文，果然，作文一开始就回答了我的问题，因为社会现象如此。开篇的社会现象的列举，虽然表述还需要再斟酌，但这也确实是社会现实的“文明”情况，接着你又具体写了身边发生的事情，每一个人物的出现都很妙，都似乎是你安排好的出场人物，突出不文明的现状。最后进行议论。那么老师想说，其实现象是很吸引读者的，但是你的题目重点在“论”哦，作文的篇幅上来说，论的比重显然不够，所以，老师建议你，现象只是引出你论点的方法，但是重点要在论，提出你的论点，论证你的观点，最后归纳结论，这是议论文最基本的结构哦。写议论文之前，理论知识要先做足。