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Be in distant countryside, before grandfather home, have a lakelet. The lake is not big, have a lot of lotus leaf, lotus however. Grandfather grandma likes carry on one's shoulder very much all along, accordingly they still built a small shed. Asing if is those who felt grandfather grandma in every possible way take care of, this lotus is just as each little baby, get too delicate, carefree.

在遥远的乡下,爷爷家前,有一片小湖。湖不大,却有许多荷叶、荷花。爷爷奶奶一向都很喜欢荷,因此他们还搭了一个小棚子。仿佛是感受到了爷爷奶奶无微不至的照顾,这荷花犹如一个个小婴儿,过得精致、无忧无虑。

I think life ought be so beautiful Xian Yan.

我以为生命本该就是这样明媚鲜妍。

But after half month, come to grandfather home again when me, the one act before makes me however be left speechless with wonder or fear. Lotus, lotus leaf is early what did not have summer is provoking love, as if anile a few years old, the light that be smoked vitality is general, be without mental land is small head. Look far, one is the gray that is without opportunity of survival completely. My be extremely puzzled, jing asks a grandfather its friend. Original grandfather grandma is occupied last week handled native place, a rainstorm fell during, after coming back, man Chi's lotus becomes such scene. The grandfather enters the water unplugged carry on one's shoulder of one individual plant comes up, discover lotus root also rotted, lotus root is the root of carry on one's shoulder, it is the coming year can the key of reopen, this is informed from inside my grandfather mouth.作文吧 WWW.zuOwEnBa.Net

可半个月后,当我又一次来到爷爷家,眼前的一幕却令我咋舌。荷花、荷叶早就没有了夏天的惹人喜爱,仿佛衰老了几十岁,被抽光了生命力一般,毫无精神地低着头。远远望去,一片满是毫无生机的灰色。我大惑不解,惊问爷爷其故。原来爷爷奶奶上周有事处理去了老家,期间下了一场暴雨,回来后,满池的荷花就变成如此情景了。爷爷下水拔了一株荷上来,发现藕也烂了,藕是荷的根,是来年会不会再开的关键,这是从我爷爷口中得知的。

Oh, life also is flimsy.

噢,生命也是脆弱的。

There also is one pond carry on one's shoulder by Suzhou village, it is completely feral nevertheless. I am accidental transient over there, saw that carry on one's shoulder involuntarily, feeling also is gray, with those as good as that see in grandfather home last. But looked again, feel to seem to be mixed again the carry on one's shoulder of grandfather home is a little different. Come to pond edge careful scrutiny then.

在苏州小区旁边也有一塘荷,不过是完全野生的。我偶然一次路过那里,无心看了一眼那片荷,觉得也是灰色,与上次在爷爷家见到的那些无异。但又看了一眼,觉得好像又和爷爷家的荷有些不同。于是来到池塘边细细看。

The lotus leaf atrophy with those huge summers is gotten and my hand is about the same big. Flat gray lets person suspicion just be touched gently really, meet immediately melt into is pulverous. But the nervation of that carry on one's shoulder and bine, it is one branch however alone beautiful, they are having instead marked deep green, so green that verdant and luxuriant, green dark.

那些夏季硕大的荷叶萎缩得和我的手差不多大。萧条的灰色真让人怀疑只是轻轻一碰,就会立刻化为粉末。但是那荷的叶脉与茎,却是一枝独秀,它们反而有着醒目的深绿,绿得苍郁,绿得深沉。

I think, this is not the make a stand against to the destiny? It is the strength of character of life more!

我想,这不正是对命运的抗争吗?更是生命的风骨!

That pond lotus of grandfather home, was used to coddle since childhood them, had lost the qualification with make a stand against of hardships of a journey or of one's life, cannot pass how long, they can rot in silty in. And here, silty the lotus root in is accumulating power, the summer that is the coming year is thick accumulate thin hair, prepare amaze the people with a single brilliant feat.

爷爷家的那塘荷花,习惯了娇生惯养的它们,已经失去了与风霜抗争的资格,过不了多久,它们便会烂在淤泥之中了。而这里,淤泥里的藕在积蓄着力量,为来年的夏季厚积薄发,准备一鸣惊人。

Think consider is worn, the appearance that lotus of full pond of summer of the coming year blooms ases if to be before.

想着想着啊,来年夏季满塘荷花盛开的样子仿佛就在眼前了。

Article language is beautiful, the depict of the lotus to different place is vivid and meticulous, let a reader can feel the gesture of lotus. The article is full of philosophic theory, carry the picture of different to different place lotus characteristic especially, the import that allows a reader to comprehend life in simple narration and to life clinging with pursuit, this is the place with this the most absorbing composition. Composition material originates the life, the body in the picture that can see from everybody realizes the reason that gives rough this mortal world, with small see big, leave deep impression to the reader, and composition structure is whole, distinct, clew clarity, the clue is coherent, a very outstanding composition is whole, the teacher likes very much, hope you can continue to cheer!

本文语言优美,对于不同地方的荷花的描写生动细致,让读者能够感受到荷花的姿态。本文富有哲理,尤其是通过对不同地方荷花不同特点的描写,让读者在简单的叙述中领悟到生命的意义和对人生的执著与追求,这是这篇作文最吸引人的地方。作文材料来源于生活,从人人都能见到的景象中体悟出不平凡的道理,以小见大,给读者留下深刻的印象,而且作文结构完整,层次分明,线索清晰,情节连贯,整体而言是一篇非常优秀的作文,老师非常喜欢,希望你可以继续加油!