Looking at the bright and clear moon outside the window, I do not have drowsiness tardy, after-thought comes home this late experience, I can't help upsurging in the bottom of the heart a warmth.
望着窗外皎洁的月光，我迟迟没有睡意,回想这一次回家晚了的经历，我不禁在心底涌起一阵温暖。
Go attending the chair of knowledge of teenage emergency treatment that community holds this morning, meet unexpectedly of as it happens my classmate, also want to work without what thing today anyway, I go to his home playing with pa Mom come to an agreement or understanding, and agree came home at 12 o'clock.
今天上午去参加社区举办的青少年急救知识讲座，正好碰见我的一个同学，反正今天也没有什么事要干，我就与爸妈说好去他家玩，并且答应十二点就回家。
In his home we watched TV a little while first, played chess next, two individual each other have be defeated win, , we are enmeshed in the joy that mutual rich weichis so, had gotten on for insensibly at 12 o'clock. See time still have so a few minutes, I have a place not be willing to part with or use goes, then we played to rise again. Wait for me to remember time comes, see watch, bad, immediately a bit. I left immediately classmate, hurriedly homeward in hurry to.
在他家我们先看了一会儿电视,然后就下起了象棋，两个人互有输赢,，我们就这样沉浸在互相博弈的快乐中，不知不觉已经快到12点了。看看时间还有那么几分钟，我有点不舍得走，于是我们又玩了起来。等我想起时间来，一看手表，坏了，马上就一点啦。我立刻告别了同学，急匆匆地向家里赶去。
Go on the way home, abrupt neck shrinks, feel chilly. Look up see a day, the sun is being hanged in the sky, also wind of it doesn't matter, how is the meeting cold? Some feel puzzled in the heart, listening to a little ineffable be agitated in the cicada sound heart that ” makes the “ on that tree.
走在回家的路上，突然脖子一缩，感觉凉飕飕的。抬头看看天，太阳在天上挂着，也没什么风，怎么会冷呢？心里有些纳闷，听着那树上“哇哇”叫的知了声心里有些莫名的烦躁。
Arrived corridor mouth, my rein in footstep, wanting how to should give pa Mom the explanation, cherish the mood of in fear and trembling, slowly got on a building, had not waited for me to knock, the door opened, those who receive me is not one face gravity, severity is interrogatory, however of pa Mom beam. Has not “ had a meal? Fast come over to eat. ” mom got on meal end adroitly desk, when have a meal, parents also does not have a bit blame. Just ask I play not happy, drink the problem of water and so on, as if to come back late without me this thing.
到了楼道口，我放慢了脚步，想着应该怎么给爸妈解释，怀着忐忑不安的心情，慢慢的上了楼，还没等我敲门，门就开了，迎接我的不是一脸严肃、严厉的讯问，而是爸妈的满面笑容。“还没吃饭吧？快过来吃吧。”妈妈熟练地把饭端上了桌，在吃饭的时候，父母也没有丝毫责怪。只是问我玩儿的开不开心，有没有喝水之类的问题，仿佛没有我晚回来这件事情。
I just am known, parents won't blame you because of your mistake or the manner that are you, although have, that also is for hello, outside amuse oneself, although happy, also can have air cooling cold rain, the home just is forever support, it is the port that keeps out wind and rain for you, no matter how do you do, parents is of one mind for the child. So we should be thankful of parents pay, those who treasure parents to give you is good as bad as “ ” , because anyway, the parental love to children and consideration, it is altruistic forever. Although sometimes we still cannot understand completely, but answer now look more those things of hour happening, also had with different at that time recall with emotion and mood, perhaps this is the process that our place must want to experience. So we had been done with respect to effort today, let will regret a few lesser to mix tomorrow vexed.
我才懂得，父母不会因为你的错误或是你的态度来责备你，即使有，那也是为了你好，在外面玩耍，即使快乐，也会有冷风冷雨，家才是永远的依靠，是为你遮风挡雨的避风港,不管你怎么做，父母都是一心为了孩子的。所以我们应该感恩父母的付出，珍爱父母给你的好与“不好”，因为不管怎样，父母对子女的爱与关怀，永远都是无私的。尽管有时我们还无法完全理解，但是现在回望更小时发生的那些事情，也有了与当时不一样的感怀和心情，也许这就是我们所必须要经历的过程吧。那么我们就努力做好今天，让明天可以少一些后悔和懊恼。
So we are about hard let oneself do not want again “ evening coming home ” .
所以我们就要努力的让自己不要再“回家晚了”。
This composition is with lying on the bed moon of static Wang Jiaojie is inscribed to bring, next, full text is passed layer upon layer the way that moves chrysalis, the experience that comes home late to oneself undertakes go into particulars, content is vivid full and accurate, readability is very strong. The article still has certain relaxed, nature, and of rich and colorful clever imply, for instance, before dawn caught up with the way home hurriedly at 1 o'clock, conveniently comes brushstroke is painted, the scenery before, blend in inner affection, clear and touching, after be being read, leave deep impression to the person. Civil paragraph in behavioral picture, bearing depict, environment depict waits, the attentive observation that each place reflects an author lives to compose a characteristic at what think mildly, this also makes whole article appears more contented and fascinating. The section consciousness of the article appears have inadequacy a bit, hope when to will reading text henceforth, notice more, the paragraph that comprehends normative text differentiates the rule.
这篇作文以躺在床上静望皎洁月光为引题，接下来，全文通过层层拨茧的方式，对自己晚回家的经历进行详细叙述，内容生动详实，可读性很强。文章还有一定的轻松、自然，并且丰富多彩的灵动意味，比如，凌晨一点钟急匆匆赶回家的路上，随手来一笔描画，将眼前之景物，融入内心之情感，真切感人，读完之后，给人留下深刻印象。文段中有动作描写、神态描写、环境描写等，每一处都体现出作者的细心观察生活和善于思考的写作特点，这也使得整篇文章显得更加充实而引人入胜。文章的分段意识显得稍有不足，希望今后在阅读文本的时候多注意，领会规范文本的段落划分规律。