Young those memory when had blurred gradually now, remember have part of Na Yizhang order only. That bundle is smooth, return in my brain all the time however.
幼时的那些记忆现在已经渐渐模糊了，想起的只有那一章章片段。那束光，却一直在我的脑海中重现。
Kiln factory is my the 2nd home town, there is what high buildings and large mansions over there, also do not have what bazaar, it is a person much, tree the animal is much, much.
窑厂是我的第二家乡，那里没有什么高楼大厦，也没有什么商场，就是人多、树多、动物多。
Most the night that those who make me impressive is that peaceful, I and grandma enjoy the cool in the courtyard, numerous star is nodded in the sky, cicada “ knows to know ” ground to cry, listening to a grandma to tell ethereal story, fool me to enter Mian.
最让我印象深刻的便是那个恬静的夜晚，我和奶奶在院里纳凉，天空中繁星点点，蝉儿“知知”地叫，听着奶奶讲天上的故事，哄我入眠。
I am confused will go off when, one flies the hair that the dot that move passed by me, I open an eye, ah, it is a lovely firebug. This is I see firebug for the first time, I am extremely excited, one roll jumps down from the leg of the grandma, go attacking that bub. Its body sparkles the flying move of the ground, and fly across more tall, I can be not caught up with, crouch on the ground to feel wronged and act rashly, did not work.
正在我迷迷糊糊将要睡去的时候，有一个飞动的小东西掠过了我的头发，我睁开眼睛，呀，是个可爱的萤火虫。这是我第一次见到萤火虫，我激动极了，一骨碌从奶奶的腿上跳下来，去扑那只小家伙。它的身体闪闪地的飞着，而且越飞越高，我可赶不上了，蹲在地上赌气，不干了。
The grandma walks over, hold in the arms gently remove me to say: “ now you but tall, I hold you in the arms to chase after that indocile small insect. ” grandma is running, I am laughing, no matter catch firebug, we are very happy.
奶奶走过来，轻轻地抱起我说：“现在你可高了，我抱你去追那只不听话的小虫子。”奶奶跑着，我笑着，不管有没有抓到萤火虫，我们都很快乐。
Be tired really, we sit on big bamboo chair, the grandma tells to me again rise the story before her: The motherland is very poor still when the grandma is small, nevering mention it is a toy, connect a meal also be on short commons, but working people has wisdom most, themselves makes a few simple toys, arrived to catch firebug in the evening. A plastic and transparent bag is held after they caught a lot of firebug in, regard this as without the lamp the lamp, although poor, also know enjoy. Father was born later, ” of “ firebug lamp is he reads the lamp that writes a word.
实在是累了，我们坐在大竹椅上，奶奶又给我讲起来她以前的故事：奶奶小的时候祖国还是很穷的，别说是玩具了，就连饭也吃不饱，但是劳动人民是最有智慧的，他们自己做一些简单的玩具，到了晚上就捉萤火虫。他们捉了许多萤火虫后就装进一个塑料透明袋里，没有灯就把这个当作灯，即使贫穷，也懂得享受。后来爸爸出生了，“萤火虫灯”便是他读书写字的灯了。
I listen entered fan, the psychology of curious envy also arises spontaneously: I also envisage “ you have so much firebug in that way, you accompany me to catch, good, grandma? ～ ” I am shaking the shoulder of the grandma. “ goes, present firebug is already very few nevertheless, resemble us at that time, have everywhere really. ” I again no matter ability is so much, heard a grandma to promise to jumping to run.
我听的入了迷，好奇羡慕的心理也油然而生：“我也想像你们那样有那么多萤火虫，你陪我去抓，好不好，奶奶？～”我摇着奶奶的肩膀。“行，不过现在的萤火虫已经很少了，像我们那个时候，真是到处都有啊。”我再才不管那么多呢，一听到奶奶答应了就跳着跑了。
We come to Tian Li, I poke a meadow to look for firebug, always do not have however, those who greet is one caboodle mosquito and small winged insect. The grandma says to go up to search well in careless leather with me, those firebug above, saying her to install jar of a glass to give me to with respect to capture. I am extremely excited, holding that glisten glass canister in both hands, there is a ray in the eye. “ , very beautiful! I am calling ～ ” , “ thanks a grandma! I think ” to there is not happier than me child for certain in those days.
我们来到了田里，我拨开草地找萤火虫，却总是没有，迎来的是一堆蚊子和小飞虫。奶奶跟我说在草皮子上好好找找，那些萤火虫都在上面，说着她就逮到一只装进了一个玻璃罐子给我。我兴奋极了，捧着那个闪闪发光的玻璃罐，眼睛里充满着光芒。“哇，好漂亮！～”我叫着，“谢谢奶奶！”我想那时肯定没有比我更幸福的孩子了。
Until when sleeping, I still put that firebug in bedside to be being admired, the laugh of chuckle ground is worn. The grandma says: “ put it, let it come home sleep, it is already tired. ” I am a little loath at the beginning, heard the word of the grandma later, I jump at a draught, “ goes, we let it come home. ”
直到睡觉的时候，我还把那只萤火虫放在床边欣赏着，咯咯地的笑着。奶奶说：“放了它吧，让它回家睡觉吧，它已经累了。”我一开始有些不情愿，后来听了奶奶的话，我一下子跳起来，“走，咱们让它回家。”
The grandma opens the lid of vitreous jar, lovely firebug flies from within, fly towards distant place. I look at firebug, window ases if smaller and smaller, “ good-bye, firebug, will look for me to play tomorrow certainly again! ”
奶奶打开玻璃罐子的盖子，可爱的萤火虫便从里头飞出来，向着遥远的地方飞去。我看着萤火虫，亮点仿佛越来越小了，“再见，萤火虫，明天一定又来找我玩！”
It is I see firebug for the first time that time, also be the last time, then Shu Guang illumed the heart, let me always do not forget the memory of childhood.
那一次是我第一次看到萤火虫，也是最后一次了，那束光点亮了心灵，让我时刻不忘童年的回忆。
Author: Gu Yuxin
作者：顾雨馨
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导师点评：
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小作者本篇文章写得童趣满满，很不错。全文围绕着萤火虫展开，写了几个场景，既有当时的，又有更以前的，它们一起组成了一幅温馨的动态画卷。全文最大的亮点是整篇文章透出的那种欢快和谐，从这也可以看出小作者有着一颗爱生活的心，还有丰富的内心世界，不然是写不出这个样子的。选材上，小作者也是紧紧围绕中心选材，使得文章中心很突出。不过有一个地方要注意，～这个符号在这种正式的作文写作中不要用，平日自己写小散文可以用。
Directive teacher: Du Haitao
指导老师：杜海涛