" toward Hua Xishi " it is Lu Xun those who write is exclusive collect of essay of a memory, the first time see this book is on desk of my elder sister that sees, because mom lets me look for a the elder sister's book,look, one I saw " toward Hua Xishi " , broke up probably, I discover to there are a lot of stories in this book, does the heart think: ? Does joyous ㄐ of of Bo of family name of grave of lament of cook a meal of pay of surname of A Chinese-style unlined garment of of Liang of joint of bones of pagoda tree of ∫ of pay word ticket blow S of float of Han of male appearance Huang to crack a joke aluminium of the spruce bank that bow with hands clasped to a head revive 5 to joke of Luo of Jue joint of bones does comfort does joint of bones of the Jue that blow a straw a kind of bag does bifurcation shake garment Gu to make fun of leech? Ji of Jie of spoon source brave spring Yi Shu of Xi of shovel of the flatter other Xi head?
《朝花夕拾》是鲁迅写的唯一一部回忆散文集，初次见到这本书是在我姐姐书桌上那看到的，因为妈妈让我去找一本姐姐的书看一下，一眼我就看到了《朝花夕拾》，大概翻了一下，我就发现这本书中有很多的故事，心想:这么势薄一本书，还有这么多的故喜，一定写的得不详细。于是我就放下了这本书。第二次看到这本书已经被我买了，因为老师说是一本好书，可以买回来看看。可自从买回来后，就放在那落灰了。出自 wwW.zuoWEnBA.nEt
When seeing it the 3rd times again, I had fallen in love with it. A day midday, I feel at a loose end is dull, took accumulate full dirt it, static next hearts will admitted to be read really. Just read the first to be attracted by the story of this book, although have a lot of stories, but the have minute that content still says has slightly, the language of Lu Xun is vivid also and interesting, let me be read stop no less than coming, regret to did not look earlier.
第三次再看它时，我已经爱上了它。一天中午，我觉得闲着无聊，就拿起了积满灰尘的它,静下心来认真的地读了起来。刚读第一篇就被这本书的故事吸引了，即使有很多故事，但内容依然讲的得有详有略，鲁迅的语言也生动有趣，让我一读就停不下来了，后悔没早点看。
This book most those who make me deep is " father's disease " , this one chapter lets me see the close situation between father and son, what also saw certain traditional Chinese medical science is ancient pretend to be profound. Pass domestic misfortune, expression is right quack by accident of the person abhor, in this one chapter, after father falls ill, “ my ” demands medical service everywhere, every time my ” of the “ when father abandons can encourage him, hear the doctor that has had every time, go demanding medical service for father with respect to what fling caution to the winds. Improve to make father's disease has, “ my ” spelled life even even, run into go extracting drug in remote mountains, I felt feeling of strong father and son here. Let me know should believe science, not superstitious, want with normal, scientific channel, will solve difficulty quandary, cannot busy it is to work in vain however a long time, all in vain.
这本书最让我深刻的是《父亲的病》，这一章让我看到父子之间的亲情，也看到了某些中医的古故作高深。通过家庭的变故，表达对庸医误人的痛恨，在这一章中，父亲生病后，“我”便到处求医，每次父亲放弃时“我”都会鼓励他，每次听到有好的医生，就不顾一切的去为父亲求医。为了使父亲的病有好转，“我”甚至于还要拼了性命，跑进深山里去采药，这里我感到了浓浓的父子情。让我懂得了要相信科学，不要迷信，要以正常的，科学的渠道，来解决疑难困惑，不能忙了半天却是白忙活一场，竹篮打水一场空。
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The famous work that the article introduced Lu Xun gentleman " toward Hua Xishi " , through be opposite oneself are mixed " toward Hua Xishi " the lot between conveyed him to be opposite of this book like, full text love is true. The enlightenment that this book also conveys to bring you with specific example in the composition and think, whole composition narrates nature, logic is clear. Nevertheless, a few problems also exist in the composition. Your composition title is “ is interesting " toward Hua Xishi " ” , but you recount the source between you and this book in composition begin with very large space, the teacher feels to not was necessary, of preamble matting too much, did not enter a text tardy, this hope you can notice in the following writing!
本文介绍了鲁迅先生的名著《朝花夕拾》，通过对自己和《朝花夕拾》之间的缘分表达了自己对这本书的喜欢，全文感情真挚。作文中也用具体的例子表达这本书带给你的启示和思考，整篇作文叙述自然，逻辑清晰。不过，作文中也存在一些问题。你的作文题目是“有趣的《朝花夕拾》”，但是你在作文开头用很大的篇幅来叙述你和这本书之间的渊源，老师觉得没有必要，前文铺垫的太多，迟迟没有进入主题，这一点希望你在以后的写作中可以注意一下！