I have a teacher, taught me 3 grade, although have that 3 years short only, but, she makes me happy, let me grow. She makes I experienced harden oneself, saw rainbow. The …… of Chinese teacher —— Mr. Xu that she is me
我有一个老师，教了我三个年级，虽然只有那短短的三年，但是，她让我快乐，让我成长。她使我经历了磨练，见到了彩虹。她就是我的语文老师——徐老师……
3 grade, mr. Xu comes to the side of me, make I changed lifetime. Before Mr. Xu comes, I am a piquant child! Achievement is not very good, composition I can be written only a few to 100 come a word, and my biggest mistake is lazy.
三年级，徐老师来到了我身边，使我改变了一生。徐老师来之前，我是一个调皮的孩子！成绩都不是很好，作文我只能写几十到一百来个字，而我最大的毛病就是懒惰。
3 grade the first day, mr. Xu stride goes, brought up one, noisy upland say: “ everybody is good, I surname Xu, call Xu Hongyu, everybody can call me Mr. Xu. ” Mr. Xu attends class vivid and interesting, let me ceaselessly think, teach us to practice calligraphy, writing. Once, my speech does not calculate wonderful, but Mr. Xu nods: “ is very good, give applause! ” field fell to give out deafening applause immediately. I just understand now, that is to encourage me, make I progress.
三年级第一天，徐老师大步走进来，鞠了一，响高地说道：“大家好，我姓徐，叫徐洪玉，大家可以叫我徐老师。”徐老师上课生动有趣，不停的让我思考，教我们练字、写作。有一次，我的发言并不算精彩，但是徐老师点点头道：“很好，给予掌声！”场下顿时发出了震耳欲聋的掌声。我现在才明白，那是鼓励我，使我进步。
One day, mr. Xu gave us to assign an interesting task, ramble alone in Zhou Wei bazaar, come back to write to ramble about you next the composition of bazaar. I very have a headache, writing a composition is a when I like least of all, but do not have method, must write. Come back from bazaar, I took the first stroke of a Chinese character to write a story about my squid, but have ten, alas, do not have method, calculated!
一天，徐老师给了我们布置了一个有趣的作业，在周未独自逛商场，然后回来写一篇关于你逛商场的作文。我很头痛，写作文是我最不喜欢的一项，但是没办法，必须写。从商场回来，我拿起笔写了一篇关于我鱿鱼的故事，但有十几排，唉，没办法，算了吧！
School within, mr. Xu corrects a composition, let us stay change. Mr. Xu comes over to tell me how to change personally, I write too slightly, should write detailed place. “ for instance, this place, just arrive bazaar, the place that should write you sees, huge crowd of people, have what area, electronic area, book division, life division, can add picture of a few languages, psychological depict. “ Mr. Xu points to to say over there the move with the pen. I nod, here, can join oneself open-eyed ……”
学校里头，徐老师批改作文，让我们留下来改。徐老师亲自过来告诉我怎么改，我写的太略了，应该写详点。“比如，这个地方，才到商场，是不是应该写一下你的所见，人山人海呀，有什么区，电子区、书本区、生活区，可以加一些语言描写，心理描写等。“徐老师用笔指着那里说。我点点头，“这里，可以加入自己的惊讶……”
Elementary school fast graduation, but I hate to part with a such outstanding teachers, a great teacher. Mr. Xu, you can teach us 6 years again ……
小学快毕业了，但我舍不得这样一位优秀的老师，一位伟大的老师。徐老师，你能再教我们六年吗……(文/谢咏衡)