In the process that grows in me, I encountered me fortunately to give birth to the noble that hit the target. She resembles a bright lamp, enlightened my progressive path; She resembles a bridge, wear the way that had me to succeed; She resembles a bundle of sunshine, warm my interior …… this “ her ” , it is my Mr. Li when 5 grade.
在我成长的过程中，我幸运地遇到了我生命中的贵人。她像一盏明灯，照亮了我前进的道路；她像一座桥梁，架起了我成功的路途；她像一束阳光，温暖了我的心灵……这个“她”，就是我五年级时的李老师。
Mr. Li is our Chinese teacher, her dress is simple, a beautiful long hair, a pair of sagacious eyes. She is very simpatico, but sometimes, when attending class especially, she will be very severe. A such everyday teachers, it seems that no wonder, but she is the noble in my life.
李老师是我们的语文老师，她穿着朴素，一头秀丽的长发，一双睿智的眼睛。她很和蔼可亲，但有时，尤其是在上课的时候，她会很严厉。这样一位普普通通的老师，似乎不足为奇，可她就是我生命中的贵人。
I 5 grade have period of time to attend class to do not have method to center energy attend a lecture all the time, take a look constantly, mr. Li call-overs on classroom many times criticize me, I am helpless unceasingly, but every time I think serious, hit namely however do not have mind, I am forced to continue to go down so. When exam, I just am compared serious. Who knows exam mark to come out, if I encounter —— of a thunder from the clear sky I took an examination of many minutes of 70 —— to want only at the outset but I take an examination of many minutes 80 all the time even 90 minutes ah! I am vexed unceasingly. Mr. Li calls me the office, I am very nervous, think regular meeting is criticized. Who knows Mr. Li to ask me to sit on the chair, discuss the complex problem on my examination paper to me. She tells at the same time analyse at the same time: You see “ , because,this problem is careless, because the base is not strong,this problem is, this problem ……” I am very ashamed, this is me at ordinary times the result of not serious listen to a talk ah! After the teacher is told to me, ground of sincere words and earnest wishes says to me: “ to let you can serious listen to a talk, teacher and you discuss, teacher and you are one case, we learn to had managed our together, ? We come the match! I touch ” very much, emphatically nods.
我五年级有一段时间上课一直没办法集中精力听讲，时常走神，李老师好几次都在课堂上点名批评我，我无奈不已，可每当我想认真，却就是打不起精神，我只好继续这样下去。等到考试了，我才比较认真。谁知考试分数一出来，我如遇晴天霹雳——我只考了70多分——想当初我可是一直考80多分甚至90分的啊！我懊恼不已。李老师把我叫到办公室，我很紧张，以为一定会受到批评。谁知李老师请我坐在椅子上，给我讲我试卷上的错题。她一边讲一边分析：“你看，这道题是因为粗心，这道题是因为基础不扎实，这道题……”我很惭愧，这都是我平时不认真听讲的结果呀！老师给我讲完后，语重心长地对我说：“为了让你能够认真听讲，老师和你商量一下，老师和你一起，我们一起学会管理好自己，好吗？我们来比赛吧！”我很感动，用力地点点头。
Evermore, I had controlled myself hard, make oneself do not take a look, once want a look, think of that word of the teacher, more serious. Mr. Li also goes up to show smiling face to me in classroom accordingly. Take an exam the next time, my seriously exam paper, took an examination of 90 minutes, taking examination paper, I have kind of impulse that wants to cry suddenly. I can take an examination of high component, because,be of Mr. Li teach!
从此以后，我努力地控制好自己，使自己不走神，一旦要走神，就想到老师的那番话，就更加认真。李老师因此也在课堂上对我露出笑脸。下一次考试，我认真地答卷，考了90分，拿着试卷，我突然有种想哭的冲动。我之所以能考高分，都是因为李老师的教导啊！
I thank Mr. Li, it is she let me learn to manage her. She is the noble in my life really!
我感谢李老师，是她让我学会了管理自己。她真是我生命中的贵人啊！(文/林博)