The sky is cloudy, thunder cries like old shell, still accompanying violent storm, harsh weather was accompanying Mr. Chen to walk into a classroom, teacher every make a move, of “ Dong ” , our heart also does it one brace up, as terrific, extremely afflictive. On teacher face black if the bag is fair same, we see this manner, read the period end examination paper on teacher hand again, frighten so that sit immediately immediately straight body, double foot and approach.
天上乌云密布，雷声如大炮轰鸣，还伴随着狂风暴雨，恶劣的天气伴随着陈老师走进了教室，老师每走一步，“咚”的一声，我们的心也为之一振，如同翻江倒海，难受极了。老师脸上黑得如包公一样，我们一看这架势，再看看老师手上的期末试卷，顿时吓得立刻坐直身板，双脚并拢。
The teacher started to talk, “ takes an exam this is the most important final, however achievement however very not ideal, whole class also has 100 minutes only! Who is taken an examination of so well, my for the moment does not say, but the study manner that what I should say is you, attend class at ordinary times active raise one's hand makes a speech, of the serious home work that finish and unit test have 3 people only, it is Qi Keyu, Wang Yuxuan and Li Shuai respectively. Winner of 100 minutes when take an exam this also is here face among them one of, who is you feel? ” immediately, whole class some calls Qi Keyu, some calls Li Shuai, call my name without the person alone only however.
老师开口了，“这次考试是最重要的期末考试，然而成绩却很不理想，全班也只有一个一百分！谁考得这么好，我暂且不说，但是我要说的是你们的学习态度，平时上课积极举手发言，并认真完成家庭作业和单元测试的只有三个人，分别是戚科宇、王雨轩和李帅。这次考试的一百分的得主也是这里面的其中之一，你们觉得是谁？”顿时，全班有的喊戚科宇，有的喊李帅，却唯独没有人喊我的名字。
My heart grey meaning is cold, bend over sadly to go up in the table, like a release angry balloon. Be in at this moment, mr. Chen blurts out a name, “ Wang Yuxuan, he this 100 minutes, be worthy of, his exercise quality and study manner are rising ceaselessly. When the exam, he is serious scratch, finish calculated whole subject afresh after examination paper, write so that labour rectifies carefully and nearly, I approbated Wang Yuxuan's actual strength! Seemed to appear in ” my heart each is ablaze the sun of dazzling, melted I originally the heart with heart grey cold meaning, the sunshine in the heart that lets me is beautiful!
我心灰意冷，伤心地趴在桌子上，犹如一个泄了气的气球。就在这时，陈老师脱口而出一个名字，“王雨轩，他这个一百分，当之无愧，他的作业质量和学习态度在不断地提高。考试时，他认真打草稿，做完试卷后把全部题目重新算了一遍，写得工工整整，我认可了王雨轩的实力！”我心里好像出现了一个个闪亮刺眼的太阳，融化了我原本心灰意冷的心，让我的心里阳光明媚！
Evermore, no matter I attend what class active raise one's hand makes a speech, class hind completes work seriously, study mood is better and better also, approbate me again to let a teacher only, let me promote actual strength, more outstanding.
从此以后，我不管上什么课都积极举手发言，课后认真完成作业，学习态度也越来越好，只为让老师再次认可我，让我提升实力，更加优秀。
In the road that grow, hard, make you more and more outstanding. But of others approbate, the study that can let you more be full of motivation!
在成长的道路中，努力，让你越来越优秀。但是别人的认可，会让你的学习更加充满动力！
If say the road hard to avoid that grow has gloomy narrow part, of that others approbate the flowers and plants that is beauty, can let alley become broad and beautiful.
如果说成长的道路难免有灰暗又狭小的部分，那别人的认可就是美丽的花草，会让小路变得宽广而美丽。(文/王雨轩)