Wintersweet is not ordinary really, I praise wintersweet!
梅花实在是不平凡的，我赞美梅花！
That is a kind of flower of tenacious make a stand against, bright red leaf closely approach is together, resemble adding a person like labour. Although holding to however below the weigh of deep accumulated snow,this is loftily a kind of flower of in full bloom! Even if have the volume of infantile little hand only, it however do all one can blossoms, open, two, Man Shujie is, inexorable, antagonism is worn wind snow.
那是顽强抗争的一种花，一片片鲜红花瓣紧紧拢在一起，像加过人工似的。这是虽在厚厚的积雪的重压下却坚持着傲然怒放的一种花！哪怕只有婴儿小手的大小，它却奋力绽放，开到一朵、两朵、满树皆是，不屈不挠，对抗着风雪。
This is wintersweet, a kind of China's extremely common flower, it is ordinary flower anything but however!
这就是梅花，中国极普通的一种花，然而决不是平凡的花！
It is elegant without “ the attitude of ” , without the appearance of ” of “ very beautiful. Perhaps you should say it is not beautiful. If the United States is to show “ is elegant only ” or and so on of ” of “” very beautiful, so wintersweet calculates the good woman in getting a flower. But it is modest, tenacious, castiron, also do not lack holy, what need not carry it more is gritty with a suit lofty and unyielding character, it is the Wei husband in the flower! Had gone on the alley of flying snow of all over the sky when you, see viatic both sides stands firm loftily so one tree or a wintersweet, do you feel it just is spent? the modesty that you do not think of it, tenacious, gritty, also symbolized at least Chinese worker? you associate to be in gules China not at all unexpectedly, have everywhere gritty, resemble this wintersweet same loftily the revolutionary forerunner of the beefeater complete China of in full bloom? you did not think of further again, take the bull by the horns, be brave in the wintersweet of make a stand against, as if symbolized freely of each district of alive today bound swings definitely, the sort of heroism that uses peace of hot-blooded beefeater world is dauntless, indomitable spirit and volition?
它没有“雍容华贵”的姿态，没有“国色天香”的容颜。也许你要说它不美。如果美是专指“雍容华贵”或“”国色天香”之类而言，那么梅花算不得花中的好女子。但是它谦虚，顽强，不屈，也不缺乏圣洁，更不用提它的坚韧不拔与一身傲骨，它是花中的伟丈夫！当你在漫天飞雪的小路上走过，看见道路的两旁傲然挺立这么一树或一排梅花，难道你就觉得它只是花？难道你就不想到它的谦虚，顽强，坚韧不拔，至少也象征了中国的工人？难道你竟一点也不联想到在红色中国中，到处有坚韧不拔，就像这梅花一样傲然怒放的守卫全中国的革命先行者？难道你又不更远一点想到，不畏艰险，勇于抗争的梅花，宛然象征了今天在世界各地纵横决荡，用热血守卫世界和平的那种英勇无畏，不屈不挠的精神和意志？
Wintersweet is not ordinary flower. It is in China extremely common, be not taken seriously, the worker that follows China is similar; It has tenacious vitality, be not tormented, oppressive do not fall, the worker that also follows China is similar. I praise wintersweet, because of it not only symbolized Chinese worker, symbolized especially does our nation revive today the modesty that cannot the place on road be short of, tenacious, indomitable spirit?
梅花不是平凡的花。它在中国极普通，不被人重视，就跟中国的工人相似；它有顽强的生命力，折磨不了，压迫不倒，也跟中国的工人相似。我赞美梅花，就因为它不但象征了中国的工人，尤其象征了今天我们民族复兴道路上所不可缺的谦虚、顽强、不屈不挠的精神？
The people that lets riches and honour of those careerism, covet, buckish retrogression goes praising Na Huali's peony, go distaining this extremely common, wintersweet that grows extremely easily, I should praise loudly wintersweet!
让那些追求名利、贪图富贵、浮华的倒退的人们去赞美那华丽的牡丹，去鄙视这极常见、极易生长的梅花吧，我要高声赞美梅花！
Of young writer this " wintersweet ceremony assist " followed of Mr Mao Dun " poplar ceremony assist " , it is with “ wintersweet ” praise object, around wintersweet common however not common characteristic spreads out depict, depict not Wei severe cold, tough quincuncial elephant, used indicative technique, convey the glorification to the worker like wintersweet. But me-too trace is overweight, in writing initial stage does not repel imitate master, but experience what the article still wants finally to convey an individual distinctly, blindly the ability that the model can let an author lose intelligence of animals and substantive creative work only, hope to such writing can be cast off gradually after young writer, the mental kernel that learns master is not structure of style or manner of writing and frame. The literal strength of young writer still is worth affirmation, the hope can see an excellent work that provides individual distinguishing feature more next time, cheer!
小作者的这篇《梅花礼赞》仿照了茅盾先生的《白杨礼赞》，以“梅花”为赞美对象，围绕梅花普通却又不平凡的特点展开描写，刻画了不畏严寒、坚韧的梅花形象，运用了象征手法，表达对像梅花一样的工人的赞颂。但是模仿的痕迹过重，在写作初期不排斥模仿名作，但是文章最终还是要表达个人的独特感受，一味的模范只会让作者失去灵性和独立创作的能力，希望小作者以后能逐渐摆脱这样的写作，学习名作的精神内核而不是行文结构和框架。小作者的文字功底还是值得肯定的，希望下次能看到更具个人特色的佳作，加油！